Haiku And Shells 排句與貝殼

‧Snail and clam Shells,
‧Found in early spring day,
‧Made them funny faces.

I try to write a Haiku poem. A Japanese Haiku needs to have three lines 5-7-5 (17) syllables or less and about one of 4 seasons, and ...
I hope my blog readers in Japan or anyone who know Haiku would give me feedback or comments.


‧蝸牛偕蛤蚌,
‧留殼供人早春賞,
‧組成臉譜圖。

自學排句詩, 留給自己來欣賞, 無師難成材。
一首日本排句詩要有三行5-7-5 (17 或以下)個音節, 含有四季之一, 且主題 ...
我真希望日本的網友或有懂得排句詩的網客能夠指點指點。